Angel Love - First Draft

Aniketh was an young aspiring writer. Orphan yet so much loved as he entertains people around him with his wisdom and the grate tales. He vowed his friends that when he finally understand LOVE, he would write something true, something heartfelt and something that would actually assist people in their journey.

 It was a beautiful sprint morning. Aniketh sitting alone in the balcony thinking of a story in making took out his dairy and Opened first page and right in the middle with perfect focus and concentration and with a truly loving intent, he wrote the word LOVE followed by the tag “Stories. There are lot left to be told and this was one that happened to me”.

Few blocks away from his place a baby conceived and the Mom was very happy for giving birth to a baby risking her life. Across the street one Vegetable seller felt happy because he made the money and can pay his daughters school fee by the dead line. Beach in the city outskirts Witnessed two true lovers laughed at each other and moved on after a long silence followed by the strong dispute. And somewhere Aniketh never knew this young lady Renu Wiping her tears across the cheeks wrote her final words on the paper “There is so much happiness and love in the world. Then why not for me?”

Aniketh being the most loved among the group enjoyed his friends company. He has fallen in love with Roshini who admire him for his wisdom and stories. She too accepted and both were having great fun in the life.

 Aniketh was too serious and was expecting the same love for him forever. But cruel destiny was expecting something else and unfortunately Roshini was never serious about the relation. He had to give up his money making job to pursue his dream of storytelling. Slowly Roshini started to avoid Aniketh.

Aniketh went berserk in the absence of her .Every time he sit to write right in the middle of white page he writes her name and period. His eyes filled with the tears. Probably he would have never thought what his strength too become his weakness one day and Roshini moved on and she got into a relation with other guy who was well settled.

 Aniketh decided to release himself from this suffocating shackles of love and restrain himself from this mortal world.

Next day morning, the place no one knew

Aniketh was trying to cut his throat his forcefully. But knife was not just moving as if some chanted some mantras and did block magic. Frustrated and having so pain in the soul, Aniketh put knife which was sharpen enough to cut the roots of Bunyan tree near his throat but again same knife is not moving but this time he could feel something. Though it’s strange to think of like that someone is stopping.

He shouted out “Who are you? Why don’t you let me kill myself?” 

“Sorry…I will tell you later. May I know why you are doing suicide?” 

“Whatever the reason why should you know. You got nothing to know that” Yelled Aniketh.

“I understand what you might be going through. But please tell me your story once” Voice that coming from nowhere.

Went on saying see Aniketh 

“Whenever life hits you with new challenge (It’s a challenge not a problem) If you say why now? Why me? Why?

 Then you will not have any story that you bravely faced. Remember every challenge about to hit you comes with two results one is success another one is Lesson-Not at all failure. The challenge you are facing be it however big...

I can’t say it’s easy to face but surely I can believe in you that you can face and come with flying colors all the way. Only thing is you need to have is Hope.

At times forgetting our past is also seems very tough as we prefer not to disturb our present. We all have that some moments, when we involve in work nothing touches our mind but the moment we take break, it all pouring in.

The excitement, joy, warmth, doubts, helplessness, hurt, and breaks down. Everything hits back in the mind. That moment don’t take decisions which costs not only your life but your parents and one’s faith put in you.

That moment talk to the one you love most and understand you like no one else that can do wonders what no magic can make. Just believe Love can only heal the scars made on heart. Thus always offer your love who knows what is one going through....”

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As Aniketh replying to Renu long talk which sounded like some philosophy class students never interested to listen “These stories are sweet enough to listen and nothing useful. By the way I have no one to care about or think about”

Renu who appeared as Angel soul in disguise Asked him with the stipulation that to let him die happily if he still want to die after telling his story “You may have no one to care about, But I am here listen to your pain and your story. Please share your story with me”

Ha ha STORY,

 “For stories I lost my love. Ok. Let me say my story one last time!” Sighed Aniketh. Told all that happened in his love story. How he wanted to tell his story to the world.

Having listened to all his story she asked “Where did all this hurt you?”

Aniketh touching his chest said “Here in the heart”

Renu answered “See Aniketh, When you soul in the heart broken, Why are you killing your body?”

By the way “Who are you, why are you disappeared?”

“I am Renu”. I did suicide to release myself from this mortal world as I thought killing my body I can be released from the pain I was going through. But now I realized "Having pain In the soul and heart, Even if you kill your body too. You will not leave this earth and have to stay in this polluted air to see all your people suffering that is even more suffering than your sufferings"

 It always tough to feel pain that is not yours...Any way share your story with me. Perhaps you might be relieved?"

Right after my graduation I had to marry a guy named Krunal for the sake of my family. I am married to him and everything was going on perfectly alright.He loved me so much, at least pretended but I was never ignored. Suddenly after one month of our marriage Krunal left home and never came back, Cried a lot and in the mean while in one f his overt I found the letter saying " Krunal loved some else before getting married to me and he had to marry me for the sake his mother who was black mailing him to get married to me.

He thought that he would forget his love and adjust with me which didn't happen and he was not comfortable with me and left the home and would never come back" And in the end he wrote quotes suggesting me to get married to the other guy possible. But who cares for the widowed or diverse women. Every young boys and the married men in the neighborhood and the city look at me differently. If I speak with anyone everyone wants to take advantage with me. I felt so cruel.

Thought I can release from this hell pain in the heart killing myself forcefully. Only thought that hit my heart before I did suicide was

"There is lot of happiness and love in the world. Why not for me".

I thought even the hell would be better than this pain in the heart. I killed myself.

Aniketh “You released yourself from the worldly pain and you are not letting me”

“Once I did suicide I realized killing your physical appearance doesn’t free sour soul from the pain. Now I have one more pain I want to come back to life as they show in the film with some chants characters resurrected but I can’t”. Though you kill yourself forcefully you are not allowed to leave this earth till our time ends here. You have to live in the air looking at all your people suffer.

I have no one. What do I do live without my love here? Why did she dumped me?

“Love. Where was it. You wanted to be in love always because you believed it adds some excitement to your life and she sought entertainment” Love happens in the soul. But we human love persons not the soul and hence we dump each other. Love that happened in the soul never dies.

 Convinced Aniketh went home and thought of everything they discussed and everything started make sense to him. Slowly time was passing by and friendship bond was getting stronger. They really shared an intimate bond, since then he used to come to that place and talk to her. They shared so many stories. Discussed about the books they read. Even Renu started enjoying vicariously the things he sharing over the period of time they have become friends and having fun in the life together.

Aniketh came back to world, forgot his pain and so interested in life again. Meeting her in day and sharing the stories and Writing again in the night has become his routine.

Every time he sit to write only force that drives him is His angel spirit love Renu, Remembering her He started writing “I never really wanted to fall in love with you. But then you shrugged pain from my shoulder and we laughed”.

Pen is just moving till the chapters are completed. He realized the reason behind his drastic change over is “Renu” and fallen in love with her. Aniketh decided to tell her that next morning. He was just dreaming whole night about the morning that is inevitable to come. In excitement time flew. All set to the moment.

Aniketh reached the spot and Called Renu.Renu appears

“Thanks for helping me understand the love. In course I realized I am lin love with you. Probably the true love this time around”

Renu replies laughing “You have gone mad, YOU REMEMBER I AM A SPIRIT”

“Why not you only said, we love person instead of the soul. That’s a mistake” Aniketh

In reply to Aniketh “See Aniketh, to love two souls are enough, to worldly satisfaction in life we need to physical appearances too”

“I need love that understands the soul, Not the Physical satisfaction that come with the two physical intercourse”

“I realized the true love with you and I want to tell this true love to world with our story”.

Inspired by His angel love and in love with her Aniketh could complete his debut novel. His manuscript is accepted by his publishers but yet to be approved by Manager. Aniketh was said that he will be notified for further discussions”

Next day morning, Aniketh phone ringing. Waking up from his slumber answered the call

“Sir, I am calling from RUPA publications, your manuscript is approved by the manager”

“Thank for the information”

“Sir, I was asked by Editor to ask you to name the Title”  

Aniketh wiping the happy tears in YIP replied “Angel LOVE”.

“Angel LOVE”

**Arya**

PS::Writing that you heard is also fun.It has it's own perks.